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I was pressed for time so I only skimmed your Stack then did my stuff. Then I Stacked a kind of Showup (not a Showdown) of a poetry jam between you and me because you said that your poems are 'unfinished'. Then I read this full stack. Each of the poems are islands connected by your Sea of Consciousness but they can stand alone with no additions/embellishments. Given that the new generation has no attention span and that even at their present length they are not even suited for The Gram, I think they are finished works.

Vogon poetry of humans in bread lines: brilliant!

Check out my post and hopefully we can meet fully loaded at opposite ends of the ranch.

I can feel my pen-finger twitchin' pardner.

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Love your clever neologisms and vivid imagery evoked!

Blessings!

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Amy, sorry...tried to hit the "Like" button, but my old Mac's OS won't let me for some dumb reason. Anyhoo, 1000 thanks for your kind comment, and for all the restacks of my most recent poems. Blessings to you as well!

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It’s always a treat to read your lovely poems, and always well worth the wait!

✨💖✨

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Thanks a million Charlotte! Have a wonder-filled week.

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Thank you, and likewise! ✨💖🤗

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Stay true to yourself Vic! We are seeing dominions crumble as truth is rising. Our work will continue to tell history as it unfolds, in our own unique way. Keep writing your clever poetry ✨🙌🏻😘

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You know I will Deborah :D and knowing great people like you will always be a source of inspiration. We are the chroniclers of reality as it’s unfolding and revealing itself before our eyes.

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Cannot agree more. We are being put together for a reason. oxox

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Love the use of neologism and playful wordsmithing. Thanks for sharing!

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Thanks so much for commenting and noticing! I'm setting out to extract as much magic and power from words as much as possible.

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Vic- always look forward to your powerful and poignant pieces. Thank you for sharing your pen with us.

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Kiana, thanks so much for your kind words. Have a wonderful week.

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