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Patrick Jordan's avatar

I was pressed for time so I only skimmed your Stack then did my stuff. Then I Stacked a kind of Showup (not a Showdown) of a poetry jam between you and me because you said that your poems are 'unfinished'. Then I read this full stack. Each of the poems are islands connected by your Sea of Consciousness but they can stand alone with no additions/embellishments. Given that the new generation has no attention span and that even at their present length they are not even suited for The Gram, I think they are finished works.

Vogon poetry of humans in bread lines: brilliant!

Check out my post and hopefully we can meet fully loaded at opposite ends of the ranch.

I can feel my pen-finger twitchin' pardner.

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Amy Harlib's avatar

Love your clever neologisms and vivid imagery evoked!

Blessings!

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