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Sane Francisco's avatar

It’s a sign! ✨

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Victory Palace's avatar

Yes, it was indeed. I live for these signs from the universe. Thanks so much SF for the kind feedback.

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h. renell's avatar

Loved the reference to the young marine - my family is a MC family. Also, the poem was great, captured the hustle and bustle of a day and the hopefulness at the end.

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Victory Palace's avatar

HR, thanks so much for the kind feedback.

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Feb 27, 2024
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Victory Palace's avatar

Thank you again for putting on your cultural detective hat! That's what I do as well when I read poetry. Gerber daisies are my favorite flower for some reason and it found its way into that poem. I can't really go into why I chose that name, but let's just say that it's my "poetic" name. And the sun is symbolic for energy, life, radiating light (both literal and spiritual). Thanks so much for appreciating this. Really means a lot.

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