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House of Neglected Poetry's avatar

It's always a treat when a little poetic Victory comes our way. Well done, VP!

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Patrick Jordan's avatar

This is what classical poetry used to be.

With a post-modern edge:

"The masticated gravel between the teeth of the iron tracks"

When you write there is a switch thrown in my head from intellect to Motion Picture Mode where the words are instantly translated to Home Movies in the Mind.

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