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Wow! What an incredible poem! There are so many wonderful parts that make up an even greater whole! Thank you for your wonderful insight and for sharing your thoughts with us! (This is not the poet by the way, I'm using his substack :) AC

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You took the "Wow!" right out of my mouth!

Amazing stuff, from one who generally avoids all things poetry. Well that may be an overstatement; it's just that so much of what passes for poetry is (to me, at least) abstruse word salad. But this is gold.

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Oh, thank you again so much for the kind feedback, Joanie! I hope this was a good intro to poetry. I totally agree with you on your assessment of poetry (especially these days). They're just not saying anything meaningful/relevant as far as I can tell. I'm just writing for anyone, to reach everyone's heart, mind and soul. FYI, I don't have a degree in poetry/creative writing. I'm self-taught, and love the work of a few poets who've inspired me. Thank you kindly for this feedback. It really means a lot.

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Bless your inspired creations!

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Thanks a million! Have an awesome Sunday! Blessing your work as well!

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Michael thanks so much for sharing your powerful affirmations and I’m sure they’re having an incredible effect on your life! Thanks again for enjoying and commenting on this poem. 🙏🙏🙏

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Thank you! After living 58 years in this plane of existence, I have learned the invaluable boon of positivity in our daily lives and I AM just trying to administer that as a quotidian anecdote to the barrage of negativity we are bathed in by the lapdog legacy media of the Cult of Moloch Cabal... Any and everything one can do to stay positive and be a source of peace, light and love for this fractured world during these trying times is my Dharma!!! Many blessings, peace and love for the new year!!!

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Might as well be as positive as possible in spite of the death cult. They’ll lose eventually because they can’t help but eat their own kind. We just have to do our best to stay out of the way. Wishing you all the health, wealth, happiness and prosperity your life can hold! Take care Michael.

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Thank was wonderful, thank you.

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Another gem!!! Reading this reminded me of an ever evolving daily affirmation I read to myself! It goes like this:

I AM

I AM!!!

I AM ONE with My Creator

I AM ONE with All Creation

I AM a brother and sister to everyone

I AM a part of every thing and every thing is a part of me

I AM Loving

I AM Light

I AM Peaceful

I AM Quiet

I AM Good

I AM Caring

I AM Merciful

I AM Helpful

I AM Healthy

I AM Strong

I Am Powerful

I Am Brilliant

I AM Smart

I AM Frugal

I AM Honest

I AM Truthful

I AM Free

I AM Awesome

I AM Magnificent

I Am Beautiful

I AM Patient

I AM Tolerant

I Am a Listener

I AM Blessed

I AM Wealthy Beyond Measure

I AM Happy

I AM Loving

I AM!!!

I AM GOD in human form; experiencing life and a physical existence here on earth! Just like Rama and Krishna are Lord Vishnu come down to earth, appearing in this dimension, as humans and experiencing life and everything that comes with being a human; so am I!!!

Thanks for posting your poetry!!!

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"cat lick, muzzle him, or achoo" OMG how do you come up with such gems.

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Hahaha...I'm glad you caught that. I'm just using a little word play, a little word magic to A) bypass the gatekeepers and B) get the message across in a lateral way; i.e. I don't identify as a religious/ethnic group. I just AM...and so are YOU.

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Exactly! Moi aussi.

(It took me a moment to "get it" and when I did I chuckled out loud ;^)

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This is an incredible affirmation. It’s so important and inspiring. What you put after I AM is so important. You’re off to a tremendous start! Glad you’re enjoying my poetry and 1000 apologies for responding to your beautiful comment so damn unforgivably late. I just subscribed to your stack and look forward to seeing you there.

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