As a card-carrying member of the Bird Tribes in this foreign territory of the mentally landlocked, I really love this eloquently simple little poem ...
It’s good to be able to take a breather and pop in here. I’ve been turning as a cog in the corporate wheel a little too “hard” as of late. These tariffs have caused a bit of chaos for my role specifically and my brain turns to mush before I get home, lots of couch surfing and letting the TV watch me.
One of my mentors has been talking a lot about 'dog consciousness' of late - a beach can see dog breeds from across the world come together and be getting along just fine within 30 seconds of sniffing each other. Meanwhile, we humans go to bicker in smalltalk about all things social, cultural, political etc. and never get anywhere to the core of our being and connection as human beings. The dogs get it, and the sparrows do too. Thank you for this piece!
As a card-carrying member of the Bird Tribes in this foreign territory of the mentally landlocked, I really love this eloquently simple little poem ...
Hey Sol, glad to be part of this tribe as well! Thanks a million for the lovely feedback.
My pleasure! Was very happy seeing this new piece in my inbox ...
A beautiful poem, Victory.
Deft imagery plays a delicately sweet tune in my mind.
1000 thanks EB!
I f only I could be a sparrow for one day!
Very High Koo, Low Coo, and Medium Rare Ku.
Economy of words paints a broad canvas.
Thank you so much PJ. Coo Coo kachoo!
Ooo, I love that last stanza! Wise birds.
Wise indeed. 1000 thanks Tara!
I am so touched
my tears fall
O how lovely
to feel the sparrows!
to see them
hear them
be blessed by them
Thank you ever so much Dr. Hall! They are the sweetest birds, aren't they?
Love the imagery!
Thanks Trudi!
A poem so sweet and true, made my eyes tear up, few things so lovely as birdsong and observing our feathered friends' precious lives!
A 1000 thanks Amy!
Another beautiful piece Vic.
Kiana, thank you sooooooo much! Great to see you again. How have you been? Hope all's well and that Life's treating you good.
It’s good to be able to take a breather and pop in here. I’ve been turning as a cog in the corporate wheel a little too “hard” as of late. These tariffs have caused a bit of chaos for my role specifically and my brain turns to mush before I get home, lots of couch surfing and letting the TV watch me.
I just love your writing. Makes me feel sure that creativity and beauty are definitely, and definitively, still alive and well. Thanks!! xo
Thanks a million WH! We're both doing our part to wake people up (if possible). Keep doing what you're doing as well, ok?
One of my mentors has been talking a lot about 'dog consciousness' of late - a beach can see dog breeds from across the world come together and be getting along just fine within 30 seconds of sniffing each other. Meanwhile, we humans go to bicker in smalltalk about all things social, cultural, political etc. and never get anywhere to the core of our being and connection as human beings. The dogs get it, and the sparrows do too. Thank you for this piece!
beautiful one ✨
You’re very welcome Dr. Dream.