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The Word Herder's avatar

Interesting poem, I like! Lots of images come up in my mind, which is good. ^_^

Is it me, or have you been away for a long time?

Regardless, nice to see you again, and read your poem.

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Patrick Jordan's avatar

Awesome, I thought: A poem about one of my favorite fruits? (although curiosity on how it ripened so early).

OK, I thought: Edgar Allen Poe juxtaposition of the affluent effluent of sports fans with the Have-Nots.

Alright, I thought: ViP has a soundtrack in his mind as he navigates the channels, and bridges and thoroughfares.

Oh No!, I thought: I don't want to even think of the be-sweatered one because it leaves a stain in my mind that even bleach can't remove.

Well, that's it, then, isn't it, I thought at the thought of 8 billion mirrors all focused on darkness to obliterate it.

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