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Dearest Dr. Hall, apologies for not responding sooner to your enthusiastic passionate reaction to my poem “Dear Reader”. I can’t thank you enough for reading and responding to it with such high praise. Would it be ok with you if I used parts of this to post elsewhere on my other platforms to show the effect my work had on you?

Yes, I use a “poetic” name as I prefer it this way at least for now while I’m still in day job land. You can call me VP if you like. When I don’t have to worry about money anymore I’ll go to my given name.

Thank you also for recognizing my two year stack-a-versary and your interest in my future work; I’m working on a putting together a book of poetry that isn’t meant for poets (because imo they’re mostly woke, whereas I’m awake and aware of what’s going on in the world at large). It’s more for appreciators of literature/art. Seriously, If more people reacted with half the enthusiasm as yours, I think I’d have a shot at an actual career in poetry.

Please feel free to dive into my other poems and share them if you feel inclined. I’m going to read Emerson’s essay about The Poet now (I’m embarrassed I didn’t know about it before-but better late than never, right?).

Anyway, thanks a million for your kind comments and thoughts!

Wishing you all the best,

VP

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in tears

i have the honor

of breaking the silence

you have endured

since June 15, 2022

Jesus what are people waiting for

The second coming?

is not the emergence

into the world

of a true poet

sufficient?

it was sufficient for Emerson

i read yet again

his essay The Poet

his ecstatic wisdom therein

and gain further capacity

to see and hear the genuine

alas I do not know your name

though you are indeed a palace of victory

and so I cannot greet you by name

both on this your second birthday

June 15, 2022 / June 18, 2024

and back then

at the start of your great career

i confess to be far more interested

in YOUR poems

than in those of others

I can already find in books

and even more interested

in your future poems

than those you have already written

this one

the first I ever read

is a tour de force

a prose poem

a poem prose

that snuck up on me

till the epiphany came:

good God he is rhyming this!!!

no i never saw the like

i know an original mind

when i find one

is there any treasure more precious

than a poet

with his soul on fire

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